NSR+WIP

MasterKojito · **Posted:** Thu May 07, 2009 11:53 am

nsr

wip - Don't know how to finish this one. Suggestion would be great!

Priam · **Posted:** Thu May 07, 2009 4:22 pm

The white blob in the middle of the 2nd one is SCREAMING for some cool eyes.

Shomari · **Joined:** Jul 2007 **Posts:** 2341 **Location:** Limbo

The colors on the first one

Kirkaldi · **Joined:** Jul 2008 **Posts:** 3083 **Location:** nyc

hmm, i like the first one a lot.

the second one, the light on the right top corner are hurting my eyes. or is it just me?

rek · **Posted:** Thu May 07, 2009 11:52 pm

1st;
Very nice colours and all, but right now, its looking kinda chaotic, cuz of that, flow is lacking. Also, even though its an abstract, try to setup a focal.

2nd;
Its way too bright. Also, all the random effects and such are drowning out any chance for a strong flow and focal.

Overall, work on composition.

Nantosh · **Posted:** Fri May 08, 2009 1:48 am

I absolutely adore the second one. No real opinion on the first, but the second one is sick.
I guess you could darken it, but it's such so frikin' sick I don't even care ^ ^
Awesome focal, hesh flow.

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