DumboDii wrote:
Well it looks pretty much same as my first sigs

But you really should erase those effects that are on top of the render.
That, and the text doesnt look to good like this.
Also, giving it a little lighting helps 2 ^^ (throw on a new layer, and set some white dots with a big soft round brush where you want the light to come from and put it on mode :"Soft light" for example) ^^
Its not so bad though

experiment a little more yourself, or follow some tut's

you learn a lot from just doing tutorials ^__^