Post subject: Re: Seems like I'm finally back on my feet
Posted: Fri Aug 07, 2009 6:22 pm
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Have used the same render so i am familiar with it, and I like what you did with it. I'd agree that the left needs more work where as the right looks great. I like the text except in the word Phoenix. The black of the background hits it in a weird way because of the opacity. Just doesnt look right to me, I'd maybe fix that and it might help it. But nice job.
Post subject: Re: Seems like I'm finally back on my feet
Posted: Sat Aug 08, 2009 4:03 am
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yea the background did look awkward, but I think it would just be better if I didn't place it like that. In that position the background's flow is contrary to the focal's flow. Why didn't I see this
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