Some recent stuff + WIP

Melez · **Posted:** Mon Sep 21, 2009 6:09 pm

^my new overall fave one

^I kind of liked this one, no one else did

^this one took a while, just the lighting is what I didn't pay to much attention to

^a request I did here, rather fast

^and the WIP I started with only pentool, but not sure what to do to make it seem nicer..

Constructive criticism please :oops:

Deadsolid · **Joined:** Dec 2007 **Posts:** 1789 **Location:**

I like them all very much but i have a hard time locating the focal. Maybe its just me though.

Mirosuke · **Posted:** Mon Sep 21, 2009 8:29 pm

*envy and jelous*

I like the first one a lot. n_ñ

Kirkaldi · **Joined:** Jul 2008 **Posts:** 3083 **Location:** nyc

Deadsolid wrote:

I like them all very much but i have a hard time locating the focal. Maybe its just me though.

I agree but I can locate them. They just don't pop out enough.

Panu · **Joined:** Aug 2007 **Posts:** 3536 **Location:** Around

meh. doesnt appeal to me at all...quite the opposite.
is there depth? i cant find it.
looks like everything is mashed in there, as if you were in a hurry.
i cant really think of anything when i see it, only the halo/SRO image.

dont get me wrong, but my eyes arent doing the best for me lately.

BrokenSaint · **Posted:** Tue Sep 22, 2009 9:34 am

Very unique style, I like the originality. You could probably work on defining focal points a little more, but I guess if that's part of the style, then there's no stopping you. :p Nice work though.

.Banshee · **Posted:** Thu Oct 01, 2009 10:50 pm

I like #3 alot. Are the light sources pentooling?

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