NSR (again)

Thomas42 · **Posted:** Thu Aug 27, 2009 5:16 am

People in the sig rate thread seem to like my current one, so I'd like to ask the professionals here too. CnC plz?

PS: sorry for making so many threads, but I don't feel like I deserve an own art thread just yet.

-Edit-
I made a V2 from scratch, in a similar fashion I did CeLL's sig, but I don't think this turned out to be any good. Nonetheless, CnC pleez.

Noobs_Slayer · **Joined:** Jan 2008 **Posts:** 1196 **Location:** AioN

My Opinion:
Ok, first let's start from flow, i mean there is none of it just random blured c4d in radom Spot. It's over contrasted at some parts, Low quality in some spots.
Effects, there are very little amount of effects (Only some sparcles). You should try to add some nebula in other works of yours. Then you need to use Color and dodge tool.
Sharp your image after you done.
There is non light source
/That's my opinion.

Thomas42 · **Posted:** Thu Aug 27, 2009 6:50 am

I though this was enough. Also, the flow was supposed to be in the direction of the sword, and the large c4d technically covering 1/3 of the sig is supposed to show this. Just imo. I have to agree it is overcontrasted though.

Noobs_Slayer · **Joined:** Jan 2008 **Posts:** 1196 **Location:** AioN

I'll show you this,

Spoiler!

Suggestions:
1. Next time choose smaller c4d, next time do it to "fit" image.
2. Light source should be 100 pixels soft round brush (oOr more)
3. Blur background and play with Burn And dodge tool.
I'm looking forward and waiting for new works, good luck

Thomas42 · **Posted:** Thu Aug 27, 2009 7:26 am

I see what you suggest there. Thanks for the tips sir. I'm not mad about it either, I just said what I thought was good. Sorry.

Noobs_Slayer · **Joined:** Jan 2008 **Posts:** 1196 **Location:** AioN

Well you did asked professional CnC, although I'm not "Pro" I can tell the major mistakes of yours, have PS only for 2nd month

Solemn · **Posted:** Fri Aug 28, 2009 3:11 am

the stock kind of just sits there.. your attempt at blending is lost due to the background having very little depth.. in the end it looks like you just started.. so keep trying.. i recommend not using any downloaded brushes for a while.. practice with textures.. filters are great

Blindfire · **Joined:** Feb 2008 **Posts:** 3844 **Location:** ...

Noobs_Slayer wrote:

I'll show you this,

Spoiler!

Why the hell would the light source be at the top, look at the lighting on the render.

Melez · **Posted:** Fri Aug 28, 2009 8:43 am

Blindfire wrote:

Noobs_Slayer wrote:

I'll show you this,

Spoiler!

Why the hell would the light source be at the top, look at the lighting on the render.

Indeed, the light source is in the right position, just not executed the best way.

Thomas42 · **Posted:** Fri Aug 28, 2009 3:24 pm

bump; I added a V2 to the first post.

rek · **Posted:** Fri Aug 28, 2009 4:59 pm

Noobs_Slayer wrote:

I'll show you this,

Spoiler!

Suggestions:
1. Next time choose smaller c4d, next time do it to "fit" image.
2. Light source should be 100 pixels soft round brush (oOr more)
3. Blur background and play with Burn And dodge tool.
I'm looking forward and waiting for new works, good luck

I think your getting a littld bit too cocky for your skill level.

Kirkaldi · **Joined:** Jul 2008 **Posts:** 3083 **Location:** nyc

rek wrote:

Noobs_Slayer wrote:

I'll show you this,

Spoiler!

Suggestions:
1. Next time choose smaller c4d, next time do it to "fit" image.
2. Light source should be 100 pixels soft round brush (oOr more)
3. Blur background and play with Burn And dodge tool.
I'm looking forward and waiting for new works, good luck

I think your getting a littld bit WAY TOO cocky for your skill level.

Notice the too. :wink:

Hostage · **Posted:** Sat Aug 29, 2009 3:15 am

rek wrote:

I think your getting a littld bit too cocky for your skill level.

Been going through threads I missed over the past weeks and, well, this is what happens when you give people nothing but goody two shoe, sugar and spice and everything nice, type of of "cnc". But I digress. He'll collapse under his own ignorance sooner or later.

DumboDii · **Joined:** Sep 2008 **Posts:** 2961 **Location:** Finland

Little tip: try to avoid placing C4Ds on top of renders face. Other than that it's not bad at all. Just keep practicing and ignore NS.

*BlackFox · **Joined:** Sep 2008 **Posts:** 7923 **Location:**

Thomas42 wrote:

bump; I added a V2 to the first post.

v2.. looks a bit boring.

I like that one better!

dom · **Posted:** Sun Aug 30, 2009 12:47 am

Hostage wrote:

rek wrote:

I think your getting a littld bit too cocky for your skill level.

Been going through threads I missed over the past weeks and, well, this is what happens when you give people nothing but goody two shoe, sugar and spice and everything nice, type of of "cnc". But I digress. He'll collapse under his own ignorance sooner or later.

**** I love this place. I need to start posting again.

AC, the new OTL.

MasterKojito · **Posted:** Sun Aug 30, 2009 2:12 am

Dom, lead us to victory.

Melez · **Posted:** Sun Aug 30, 2009 8:44 am

We only lack NuclearSilo to laugh at. :oops:

magisuns · **Posted:** Sun Aug 30, 2009 9:05 am

Quote:

<<Quit SRF because of spreading stupidity-NS>>

I LOLD. looks like hostage's prediction came true

RogueKiller · **Joined:** Jan 2008 **Posts:** 1893 **Location:**

Hostage wrote:

rek wrote:

I think your getting a littld bit too cocky for your skill level.

Been going through threads I missed over the past weeks and, well, this is what happens when you give people nothing but goody two shoe, sugar and spice and everything nice, type of of "cnc". But I digress. He'll collapse under his own ignorance sooner or later.

Truth.
And Hostage quit making people quit SRF.

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