NSR~Watch Your Back

Deadsolid · **Joined:** Dec 2007 **Posts:** 1789 **Location:**

Well, I've been an ass in others' CnC posts, so here's your chance to tear me a new one.
This is the first since October, maybe.

v2.

DumboDii · **Joined:** Sep 2008 **Posts:** 2961 **Location:** Finland

I'd like to see the render or stock you used.

I like the idea of it BUT those C4Ds ruins it. Remove them or make them less obvious and bright colored.

Noobs_Slayer · **Joined:** Jan 2008 **Posts:** 1196 **Location:** AioN

Well if ask me i would say that it's completelly work of the newbie. Lack of depht lightining and text. Try harder next time and you'll get higher grade

Deadsolid · **Joined:** Dec 2007 **Posts:** 1789 **Location:**

Yea, in hindsight, this is a horrible piece. Im going to do it over today. The C4d idea came at the last second and I honestly have no idea why I added them in. It looked a lot better without. And the flow is pretty shitty too. So I'll post a new version tomorrow or later today.

BrokenSaint · **Posted:** Fri Dec 18, 2009 8:13 am

How long did it take for you to do this?

inky · **Joined:** Nov 2006 **Posts:** 4025 **Location:**

Looks promising but it really deserves to be revisited. I would suggest taking out the C4D and either adding a new one, working with pen tool, or whatever it is you think that might look good on it. Personally, I'd go with something asymmetrical so it won't look awkward.

Also, I'm not sure if it's the picture or just the girl's rugged cheeks that makes it look like a low-res .jpg image.

Our eyes, we haz them on you. =P

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