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Kirkaldi · **Joined:** Jul 2008 **Posts:** 3083 **Location:** nyc

CnC and rate pl0x.

Kraq · **Posted:** Wed Apr 29, 2009 2:04 am

I like the 1st one more.
It has more flow and a better bg than the 2nd.

Brago · **Posted:** Wed Apr 29, 2009 2:06 am

1st 1... looks like its off the last remnant

rek · **Posted:** Wed Apr 29, 2009 2:42 am

1 looks really really flat. The effects overlapping him in the wrong places kind of kill any possible depth. focal is really weak, too much going on around him. Need to fix up lighting, his face is shadowed, but theres light everywhere. Also colouring, the tone of everything around him doesnt match up with the tone of the render itself.

2.. is your render b/w? You always seem to mix a b/w focal with a coloured everything else. :roll:

Again, work on colouring, depth, lighting. Focal isn't strong enough as well.

kiu

Kraq · **Posted:** Wed Apr 29, 2009 2:57 am

rek wrote:

the tone of everything around him doesnt match up with the tone of the render itself.
is your render b/w? You always seem to mix a b/w focal with a coloured everything else.
kiu

+1
It seems you chose renders with very neutral colors and just went with it.
Ya' know?

Kirkaldi · **Joined:** Jul 2008 **Posts:** 3083 **Location:** nyc

Kraq wrote:

rek wrote:

the tone of everything around him doesnt match up with the tone of the render itself.
is your render b/w? You always seem to mix a b/w focal with a coloured everything else.
kiu

+1
It seems you chose renders with very neutral colors and just went with it.
Ya' know?

Yeh, I just wanted a stock fast and I wanted to just go make the sig.

rek · **Posted:** Wed Apr 29, 2009 4:54 am

The stock is the sig, so choose it properly.

_Angels · **Joined:** Nov 2007 **Posts:** 707 **Location:**

orly o_O i always choose sometjhing like BOA and UTADA cuz i love um both XD on this rediculous cubic xD

anywho i like the last one..maby u should lower opacity from the orange colored spots..they take over my eye and prevent me from looking at that guy in the middle;P

Snoopy · **Posted:** Wed Apr 29, 2009 8:27 pm

SUCKSSSSSSSSSS.

I'd so go paedo for Kirk. Seriously though, they look good. KUI.

Deadsolid · **Joined:** Dec 2007 **Posts:** 1789 **Location:**

purty

A lot of crap coming in...

nice to see some talent

IceCrash · **Posted:** Fri May 01, 2009 11:38 am

rek wrote:

1 looks really really flat. The effects overlapping him in the wrong places kind of kill any possible depth. focal is really weak, too much going on around him. Need to fix up lighting, his face is shadowed, but theres light everywhere. Also colouring, the tone of everything around him doesnt match up with the tone of the render itself.

2.. is your render b/w? You always seem to mix a b/w focal with a coloured everything else. :roll:

Again, work on colouring, depth, lighting. Focal isn't strong enough as well.

kiu

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