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DumboDii · **Joined:** Sep 2008 **Posts:** 2961 **Location:** Finland

V2

V2 with blur

So what you think? I think I should make effects even more "massive" so they would cover more of the bg. But I've worked with this enough for today.

Hostage · **Posted:** Mon May 25, 2009 5:34 pm

DumboDii wrote:

So what you think? I think I should make effects even more "massive" so they would cover more of the bg. But I've worked with this enough for today.

Do this and post back..it could change the sig completely! Right now the tag is good but it's missing that wow factor.

Also, I know I'm awesome like and everyone wants to be like me

but I think you're better off without the drips they seem a little false and low quality. Or at the very least re-work them into a more realistic fashion.

BTW, Good choice of render, this is probably the first time I can say this about one of the AC newbies. Flawless composition with it--I don't think this could have been done with any other render. Just goes to prove how true what rek the rest of us have been trying to pound into you guys....the stock/render choice makes or breaks a tag.

DumboDii · **Joined:** Sep 2008 **Posts:** 2961 **Location:** Finland

Hostage wrote:

DumboDii wrote:

So what you think? I think I should make effects even more "massive" so they would cover more of the bg. But I've worked with this enough for today.

Do this and post back..it could change the sig completely! Right now the tag is good but it's missing that wow factor.

Also, I know I'm awesome like and everyone wants to be like me

but I think you're better off without the drips they seem a little false and low quality. Or at the very least re-work them into a more realistic fashion.

BTW, Good choice of render, this is probably the first time I can say this about one of the AC newbies. Flawless composition with it--I don't think this could have been done with any other render. Just goes to prove how true what rek the rest of us have been trying to pound into you guys....the stock/render choice makes or breaks a tag.

Thanks for comments. I will work with it again day after tomorrow. Have to study for my English exam tomorrow.

And yea those drops were inspired by you

They can be really cool when made well.

Miguez · **Joined:** Nov 2008 **Posts:** 5003 **Location:**

Love the style.

It's teh sexyness. :love:

Melez · **Posted:** Mon May 25, 2009 8:54 pm

I'd kill the blur. Blur doesn't go that well with vectory kind of effects imo. Keep it up.

cin · **Posted:** Mon May 25, 2009 9:00 pm

i agree with hostage on the drips and melez on the blur.

i think if you can keep this one clean and sleak, it will
really turn out great.

DumboDii · **Joined:** Sep 2008 **Posts:** 2961 **Location:** Finland

Thanks. I'm working on it.

DumboDii · **Joined:** Sep 2008 **Posts:** 2961 **Location:** Finland

New versions added!

I think I will work with it even more. Just out of inspiration for now.

cin · **Posted:** Tue May 26, 2009 2:51 pm

i really like it, even tho i'm usually not that
fond of small sigs. the only suggestion i have
left really is to get some more depth on the left
side. it's a bit flat there while depth is great
around the focal.

lavapockets · **Posted:** Tue May 26, 2009 9:09 pm

Looks awesome Dumbo! I know you're going for depth with the blurred lines/effects on the right side, but I think it could be a touch less blurred and still give you good depth. Fantastic colors though, and I love the clouds and that cute little bird.

OFT: Do you know if she's related to the Dechanel chick who plays in Bones? Zooey is much prettier imo, but they're both beautiful.

DumboDii · **Joined:** Sep 2008 **Posts:** 2961 **Location:** Finland

lavapockets wrote:

Looks awesome Dumbo! I know you're going for depth with the blurred lines/effects on the right side, but I think it could be a touch less blurred and still give you good depth. Fantastic colors though, and I love the clouds and that cute little bird.

OFT: Do you know if she's related to the Dechanel chick who plays in Bones? Zooey is much prettier imo, but they're both beautiful.

Thanks for comment.

And I dunno. I know that Zooey got sister but dunno anything about her.

Kirkaldi · **Joined:** Jul 2008 **Posts:** 3083 **Location:** nyc

I don't like that bird. >.<

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