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I tried to keep in mind Melez's advice about the flow
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That's better, it's not just a face. ;p Said that because it's hard defining flow from a head.
Though you picked a motionless focal this time, flow is good and the focal doesn't take the most space of the sig. Remove the border and add more details into the background perhaps, textures, other stocks and such on different layer modes. Keep it up.

Updated... Thanks for the critique Melez, much appreciated