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New chapter.

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I'm lazy.. I'll use one of my old stories this week..

*damn, And AGAIN, I'm second... shit..*

Now I'll just need to ajust them a bit, and upsydaisy, Maybe I'll win this week...

I appreciate the votes cast in my favor. I shall possibly write another story to continue the legacy.

Cabal has stolen my soul. Now SRF can't compete, and I end up spending too little time to get interested in writing another chapter. It might happen though, I never know.

same with rohan >.> but i'm thinking of using the "strand of thought" technique. and I might name the kid+ turn him into an anti-hero.

Aight' almost done with my story; its going to be wierd, because i made it so you can't tell if whats happening is reality or not. Is it the kid's thoughts? is it a dream? is it really happening? wth is going on hope you guys like it

I hope its confusing, let your imagination fill in the gaps
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Chapter 6: Rebirth I

And there it stood in all its grandeur and splendor; the city I left for dead. So many summers have passed, all of which culminating towards this single unified moment, surely I could not fail now… Surely.

The people of Hotan prided themselves in their warrior history, they we’re the shield of the Islamic caliphates even before the rise of Islam they acted as a buffer My people like dogs they are like slaves they shield with no reward for honor and glory HONOR AND GLORY there is no honor in a pointless death at least not yet what glory will I gain from laying my life down for these peasants none yet here I am once again at the great walls which guard this city WHY why do I come here for some worthless emperor with a hidden agenda who is he to lead me A warrior the blood of GOD HIMSELF but how how could I live up to such prestigious blood when am I right, and when am I wrong where does it begin and where does it end the perplexities of this all Damn it all for if I die it will be the end of MY line if I live, once again I will be plunged into the hell the furnace that is Hotan forced into a life I so blatantly rejected Only through complete acceptance What is mine will be MINE AGAIN!

Blissfully painful only through death may I find peace Allah FORGIVE ME my life has been bloodied by my own hands that fearsome specter oh how he tempts me my lord please why have you forsaken me DAMN ME NOT I refuse I beg of thee HEAR MY CRIES – darkness shadows my every movement where am I to find peace WHEN am I to find peace WHAT is PEACE – WHY – don’t leave me here don’t abandon me FATHER!

Kill, Leviathan, RISE, and Kill again – *ARGH* I refuse, begone I say, begone, leave me BE! You desire redemption? THEN kill again – take what is yours Leviathan, Take IT! NO! YES!, you cannot deny the truth YOU are MY son, your father was naïve to foolishly believe your birth would come without a price AWAY, I beg thee, AWAY! NO, no one can save you now – you’re mine! Leviathan live up to your name your history, YOUR BLOOD! ARRRGH, it BUUURNS! Yes you feel it, that blood is my blood, that burn, is my mark اسمع مني ، نرى أنه ، وأنا أبوك -- الخاص بك الا الاب ؛ دمع رام! لا! ، يرجى الله اني أتوسل اليك من انقاذ لي خطأ من هذ الثعبان. انا خادم الخاصة بك! تنين ، وقد ترك لك الله! NOOOOO!!! NEVER!! NO!! NEVER!! AAAAARRRGHH!!! Your light, your light is EVIL it is tainted: AWAY! Impure, away, away divine beast!! accept my Light, my child AAAAAAAARRRGH!!!

Leviathan, wake up my child. Opening his sore eyes, Leviathan awakens; he looks around; realizing what he has given up all for the sake of honor and glory, he breaks down in tears…. It will all be clear in due time, my son, It will all be clear in due time…

The Odd Meeting.

The old man had finished his saying, and Hamunn was confused. Even though he succeeded in slowly understanding what the man has told him, he still had this one little thing in his mind. Last night, when he woke up from one of the many nightmares he had, he heard this peaceful sound, and found himself slowly regenerating strength, as he was very weak from everything that has been happening the past few days. Right when he heard the sound, he started thinking about it all, what has been happening and started to calm down from the stress he had and really stated to relax. He then fell asleep, and had a nice dream about how it’s going to be.
He felt good, rested, calm. But he didn’t understand how it came. Was it a play of his mind? Or did he really hear it? And if it was, where did it come from? Many questions were running through his mind, and both Neon and the man noticed.
“Hey kid,” Neon said. “What’s up?”
“I sense you are thinking very deep about something, Hamunn.” The old man said.
“Yes, I am…” he responded. “Did you just call me Hamunn?”
“Hamunn?” Neon whimpered, “Hamunn?!!” that was his last word for a while. Neon never looked so confused, since he met him yesterday.
“Yes, I indeed called you Hamunn,” the old man said with a smile.
After a remarkable silence from Neon’s corner, finally something came out. “Hamunn as in, the crown prince of Hotan, son of King Samokoa, Hamunn?”
“I sense that you are getting angry, Neon, would you please step outside, to cool down?” the man said.
“If you would get mad about me being the prince of Hotan, then I’ll take a hike instead!” Hamunn said angy. He took his claws and ran out of the door. “May we never meet again!” he shouted as he ran away in the forest.
After a long run through the woods, he heard the same sound again. He felt his instincts get stronger, his emotional pain stream away. He followed the sound, through the woods, as if it was guiding him. He got even deeper into the woods, and then he stopped. The sound got him here, but now it was gone.
“Hi!” he suddenly heard, from up above in a tree. “How are you doing, Hamunn?”
As he looked up, he saw a pretty young girl, from around 18 or maybe even younger, sitting on a branch.
“Who the heck are you!?” he shouted, while jumping branch by branch to her branch.
“Well, I don’t know who I am, but the people who seem to know me call me Dalancy. I’m from Europe!”
After he reached her branch, he drew his claws, and was ready to fight.
“Why did you bring me here?” He asked a bit aggressively.
“Oh, but I didn’t bring you here, Hamunn, you did that yourself.” She responded with a friendly face. Without losing his attacking position, he couldn’t help but think.
“You probably want to know how I know your name, if it was me who played that music you heard last night, why a gal like me is in a place like this, and more, uh?
Well, I’ll explain that to you later, but I’m no threat to you, so you could just as well lower your weapons.”
“I’ll see for that, thank you very much” he responded with a harsh voice.
“Hmm.. Well… I know you wouldn’t trust me immediately, but I could come in handy. You see, with my skills of defending you, and with my arts of magic, I can help you. My earth magic is developed enough to make some crops grown in one minute, that would normally take a year. And my others skills can provide water, heat, and some nice feeling.”
It’s your call, Hamunn. I can advance your skills, I can give you information about almost everything, I’ll be your teacher. Say yes, and I know you trust me. Say no, and I shall erase your mind about our meeting.”
“-…”
“I take your silence as a yes,” Dalancy said. She took her staff, and started chanting. She stood up, still chanting, and shot a huge ice chunk towards Hamunn, she screamd:
“Your first Dalancy experience! This sin’t about winning or losing, life or death, but this is about getting to know me! And you shall know me, even though I don’t! Slacking is over, Hamunn! Roc is coming, Yarkan is getting stronger, and you are still here! Get your strength together, Hammud, because we’ll get it started!!” It hit him hard. Not the coming bolts of earth, fire, air and water, but the words that Dalancy screamed. After that, Hamunn didn’t want to fight her anymore, and just give up. But his blood was boiling for the adventure, and the battle.

So he started to crush the bold, he started using force, he would fight Dalancy, no matter what! Dalncy fought fierce, so did Hammun. The fought like hell, Delancy using her own defence techniques to defend herself, take power from Hamunn, and also to make him almost deaf with painfull noises. She was strong, but Hammun was too. They fought, him not realizing they were headed for the shack while fighting, where he had stormed out so quickly without thinking. When there, Neon and the man heard them coming, and they saw how Hamunn was fighting the blonde girl.

If it wasn’t for the old man’s quick use of force and his spear, they would’ve never stopped, probably, until one of them would have no energy left.
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I named "The Kid" Hamunn.. It seemed Islamic enough for me..

Yeah.. Niome, or Gonio, or however you would call her, now she's Delancy. She can't read karma's anymore, but she can tell you who is who.. (except about herself, strangely) She's a bit strange, likes to yell at people, play her music, and take care of others. such a sweet child.. also, she could become Hamunn's new teacher...

damn.. this thing is like, so incredibly unbumped...

it's me against Brotix...

Let's just hope I'll win sometime!!!

i bet you win, my story is way to confusing

couple more hours till i lock it >.<

Yeah....

it is...

Or are you just trying to tell me that mine is too simple, sleazy, unthought, so they'll have to pick yours for chapter 6?

nice....i love this...my idea (link in my siggie) is slightly different we will be usin gpics and stuff to depict what is happening and stuff via screenshots..not gonan be hard, jsut need to organize... i just need ppl like these guys to help me with the wriitng....

pm me please...thx

....What happened to the other guys? Were they just a 1 shot deal?

Cin!!!

Get your cute little butt over here, we're waiting for this to be closed!

You're on 2 days delay!

ya. was in doubt.

either leave open a bit longer wait for more submissions.

or lock it and hope for more submissions next time.

will finish up poll sticky in my study break.

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