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lavapockets
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Post subject: Poster ~ Need some suggestions Posted: Thu Mar 12, 2009 4:26 am |
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My friend's band is headlining a show next month, and the dude who was gonna design the poster isn't doing it. So he asked me. I've never made a poster before...this one isn't done but I wanted some input on what I have so far. They asked for something "naturey" or "hippyish". It's moody ethereal rock type stuff. Anyhow...suggestions please.
EDIT: UPDATED IMAGE AT BOTTOM
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Post subject: Re: Poster ~ Need some suggestions Posted: Thu Mar 12, 2009 4:41 am |
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The orange text bothers me.
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Post subject: Re: Poster ~ Need some suggestions Posted: Thu Mar 12, 2009 5:03 am |
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Shomari wrote: The orange text bothers me. I kind of like it.
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Post subject: Re: Poster ~ Need some suggestions Posted: Thu Mar 12, 2009 5:05 am |
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I think perhaps there's too much ground showing.
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Post subject: Re: Poster ~ Need some suggestions Posted: Thu Mar 12, 2009 8:31 am |
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I like it, and the orange text doesnt bother me at all :>
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Post subject: Re: Poster ~ Need some suggestions Posted: Thu Mar 12, 2009 12:57 pm |
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It's cool but I see some parts that are badly rendered. (Right side of the tree) Try deleting that landscape and put in just one tree brush with white or some light color. (just IMO)
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Melez
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Post subject: Re: Poster ~ Need some suggestions Posted: Thu Mar 12, 2009 12:59 pm |
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Imo, you shouldn't put it all in negative. Maybe leave the grass green, but the tree white.
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lavapockets
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Post subject: Re: Poster ~ Need some suggestions Posted: Thu Mar 12, 2009 1:11 pm |
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Thanks for the comments guys. I realize there's too much ground in the foreground, and something else needs to go there but I have no idea what. It needs something....
Which part of the tree are you talking about Dumbo?
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Post subject: Re: Poster ~ Need some suggestions Posted: Thu Mar 12, 2009 1:30 pm |
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 Might be just me but for me they pop out pretty much. No offence.
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Post subject: Re: Poster ~ Need some suggestions Posted: Thu Mar 12, 2009 1:57 pm |
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They don't look that bad imo, but if you think they do, just put a very small amount of blur on those edges.
EDIT: Yeah, what about some border?
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Post subject: Re: Poster ~ Need some suggestions Posted: Thu Mar 12, 2009 1:59 pm |
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Id suggest something around the poster as some kind of boarder.
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lavapockets
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Post subject: Re: Poster ~ Need some suggestions Posted: Thu Mar 12, 2009 3:10 pm |
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DumboDii wrote:  Might be just me but for me they pop out pretty much. No offence. None taken, of course. I am notoriously bad at spotting problem areas, hence why I come to ya'll  I like the border idea....the ground is really bothering me now. If I scrap the tree and come up with something else, does the text (colors subject to end product) look alright?
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Post subject: Re: Poster ~ Need some suggestions Posted: Thu Mar 12, 2009 4:54 pm |
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I like the text. But could you try the bushe thing ?
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Post subject: Re: Poster ~ Need some suggestions Posted: Thu Mar 12, 2009 6:51 pm |
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DumboDii wrote: I like the text. But could you try the bushe thing ? Yepp..I'll give it a shot later and repost 
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Post subject: Re: Poster ~ Need some suggestions Posted: Fri Mar 13, 2009 6:39 am |
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I'm guessing it is music, I don't know which genre so this might be a bit fantasy or a bit over the top, but here's a background I found the other day  . Plain:  What it could look like: Anyway, just an option for you.
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Post subject: Re: Poster ~ Need some suggestions Posted: Fri Mar 13, 2009 7:52 am |
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Snoopy wrote: I think perhaps there's too much ground showing. ¨  I rly dont like the idea that it is supposed to be a poster, the colours are just anoying. The text looks fine tho. No offence 
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Post subject: Re: Poster ~ Need some suggestions Posted: Fri Mar 13, 2009 10:50 pm |
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i like the orange. a poster shouldnt obtain small letters tho u want people to notice ur poster from far away alrddy so i suggest u use louder colors, impact eye catching fonts and loud colors that fit with the concept:) as it is now..if i would see it..i will think its a cover of a book if i didnt read it carefully..and just flashed it bfore my eyes you know what i mean? try to think outside the box. something lunatic  lotsa loud colored brushes , and theres still alot of empty space in the poster D: try to just drop some brushes/stocks/wutever on the background and place the big tree and eyecatching text on the front. well my point is... - Dont use much text. - use fonts that u can see from far away - loud colors that match the theme/concept - filling background goodluck with the poster:)
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Post subject: Re: Poster ~ Need some suggestions Posted: Sat Mar 14, 2009 2:20 am |
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Post subject: Re: Poster ~ Need some suggestions Posted: Sat Mar 14, 2009 8:55 am |
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All in honesty, I like the first one better. And imo, remove that purple-orange grad map on your new work.
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Post subject: Re: Poster ~ Need some suggestions Posted: Sat Mar 14, 2009 10:08 am |
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Lol this gave me an idea thanks to snoopy XD contest with posters :3
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Post subject: Re: Poster ~ Need some suggestions Posted: Sat Mar 14, 2009 11:49 am |
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I like the new one ! 
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Post subject: Re: Poster ~ Need some suggestions Posted: Sat Mar 14, 2009 5:59 pm |
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