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Noobs_Slayer · **Joined:** Jan 2008 **Posts:** 1196 **Location:** AioN

With Text:

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Without Text:

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.Banshee · **Posted:** Sat Aug 08, 2009 4:01 am

without text most definitely. The text could fit, and be better than both versions. Find a better place for the text and make sure it's not in a corner or on a border. Also don't put it on top of the focal just make sure it's close to it though. But you are doing superb, better than most newbies as a matter of fact.

Kirkaldi · **Joined:** Jul 2008 **Posts:** 3083 **Location:** nyc

.Banshee wrote:

without text most definitely. The text could fit, and be better than both versions. Find a better place for the text and make sure it's not in a corner or on a border. Also don't put it on top of the focal just make sure it's close to it though. But you are doing superb, better than most newbies as a matter of fact.

I better not be a newbie. And he better not be doing better than me. :twisted:

OnT: I agree with Banshee. You are improving really fast. Nice effects too. KIU.

.Banshee · **Posted:** Sat Aug 08, 2009 4:13 am

No Kirk, unfortunately he is light years ahead of you according to your current tag.

OnTopic: You should have aimed the lighting source towards or behind her head.

Sacchin · **Joined:** Sep 2007 **Posts:** 2797

Oooh, I really like the textless one. The background is really nice and easy on the eyes.

Noobs_Slayer · **Joined:** Jan 2008 **Posts:** 1196 **Location:** AioN

Thanks for comments

Now im trying to do smth new i'll post it pretty soon
EDIT
Fixed text and light source and here it is

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Priam · **Posted:** Sun Aug 09, 2009 6:44 pm

no. remove the text.

DistortedMind · **Posted:** Mon Aug 10, 2009 12:16 am

i see to be browsing this section of the forum and i come across this that girl there looks like just about to scream oooooooyeahhhh
and + i like it very good

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